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Minako Aino was walking home one day by herself, when a mysterious woman appeared. She began her attack, so Minako was forced to transform into Sailor Venus! The battle didn't last long, as this new enemy had powerful magic that could hold Sailor V in place. Before she could even ask her attacker who she was, her body began to swell. Before she could get the words out to demand what was happening to her, her attacker spoke.


"So your the one they call Sailor Venus! I have something to share with you! But watch out, it's Murder on your figure."

In horror Sailor Venus saw her once petite frame become swollen and obese, more so that anyone she had ever met. She scowled in embarrassment and rage. She could see that her body was being filled with some kind of dark energy, which for some reason was fattening her body. When her body seemed to reach it's fattest, the energy flow stopped, but the magical bindings stayed on.

"I'll see you again Sailor Venus. And I think I'll pay a visit to your friends as well. You all seem like such nice pretty girls. Enjoy your new look!"

And with that, she vanished, leaving Mina obese and wondering what to do. And on top of that, what would the others think? She had to warn them regardless!

Artist's Note: I don't know what inspired it, but this is the first part of a Sailor Moon WG comic. This was probably my most challenging piece of art to date, but I am very happy with the results. I hope you look forward to the next part of Sailor Moon; A New Enemy!

Critiques


:iconmoonvamp:
There's only one main critique for this picture that could have used some attention, and that's the way her rolls are drawn around her stomach. It almost seems that the left roll could have been extended or shaped like the right one to convey more of a equal balance for them.

Other than that, this is perhaps the best picture that this artist has released from all of his pictures. First, the rendering for both panels are wonderfully applied; the first one has an especially nice grasp on the perspective to match with Sailor Venus's position. Speaking of Sailor Venus, she's superbly drawn. Her costume has the right depth and detail to make it stand out and accommodate her weight; the shading, in particular, is very impressive as it touches just the right amount for each section, with the legs being the best feature to showcase this. Her face is done exquisitely, exhibiting the right expression to match the dialogue. Her face also flows nicely and has good lighting and toning. The blurring effect for the villain's hand is nicely applied, and the lighting for the dark powers is delectably done. The second panel, while much smaller than the first, displays the sinister nature of the villain's glare quite well with divine detail to her eyes and satisfactory shading to her face and hair.
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:iconballoonprincess:
I really like the look of this page. We can talk about the crispness of the artwork, the appeal of the coloring, and even a touch of perspective thrown in to heighten the drama ... and I'll get to that in a moment, but I want to start off with the page layout. First off, you have two really well rendered panels, very simple and setting the stage for what's about to happen. A high character appeal and care towards keeping the design work right to the original with just a bit of change to make one wonder what is happening ... the weight increase is gripping and the expression on her face just heightens the appeal. Then you have a tight and well rendered eye-shot of who is assumed the opponent ... or at least the taunter. Just this alone makes one want to see more! :)
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:iconsharkdude5590:
wow nice job, lets how that villian/ess does more than the sailor scout universe :D

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:iconxerxes13110:
Wow, it has been ages since I see a good Sailor Moon WG fanart!
And I'm very happy to read you're going to make a comic of this. I'm sure it'll be a masterpiece. :D

(*crosses his fingers to see some Ultra Sized SSBBW Sailors, in the future*)

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:iconbedbendersinc:
Thanks! Yeah, I'd been thinking I'd like to see more Sailor Moon stuff myself, and then I remembered, I'm an artist. So, time to not be lazy anymore! haha. And don't worry, this is only the beginning! There is a lot of weight to be gained. :D

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:iconbedbendersinc:
Thank you! And I think you'll like her back story very much. :D

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:iconjeagerjack:
I am so looking forward to the next part of this series. I always enjoy a good WG comic, and I can tell this is going to be a great one. Keep up the good work.
:iconsharkdude5590:
can't wait! p.s. i will get a commiss from you when i get money >_> its worth it

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I believe human being and fish can coexist peacefully.
Note me if you would like guest stories or want to talk.
Note [link] for art trades of Jessica please. She is REALLY good and I highly suggest you check her gallery!!!
:iconrandomnintendogeek:
Venus is bottomheavy and all is well in the world.

I'm looking forward to seeing where this comic goes!

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420 write fat girls every day
:icontrunks82:
excellent work! very very good use of colors, and the panels have a very comic book like feeling ^^

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:iconmrbeam:
Looking forward to the rest?!

Hell yeah! Clearly like one of your best piece to date!

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:icontrentonfoxbear:
ehehehe ^^ sexy and cool! i hope there are more :3

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long live fat furs! the fatter the better! ^_^

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