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Cream Puff

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A commission for :iconthewestkylevirus:

Ms. Pastry and Doughnut Assault created by WESTKELYVIRUS.

Doughnut Assault has immobilized the criminal Ms. Pastry by filling her full of tasty fattening cream. When will these criminals learn? :D

Artist's Note: It was fun to take on a more cartoony style for this commission. It's always fun to try and make something that's so far from your own style fit into your own technique.
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

The loops and holes that comprise the cleavage area is a bit off balance in terms of symmetry and overall shape, but this can be quite the arduous task to truly master. Her left breast seems to looks more massive than her right one and looks to hold a little different circular shape. Lastly, her puffed out left leg looks a bit misshaped. The lower section could be more wider to accommodate the roundness more easily.

The rest of Ms. Pastry's shape is well executed. The formation of her hands and their positioning is quite accurate and goes well with the angle she's drawn in. The line work has a nice contrast to it; the black lines emphasizing her shape with the light lines displaying the small details. Even the draw string looks impressive. Her expression and face is superbly showcased, perfectly exhibiting the intensity of her stare.

Doughnut Assault has a good overall design to him, and the contrast from the light hair to his thicker lined outfit is applied well.