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Commission for :iconnexis89:

Nekora and Nick created by Nexis89

This one was a lot of fun. Hope you enjoy!

Artist's Note: Also, as many have pointed out, she seems to look smaller in the middle panel. I'd like to address this by saying that I measured the pictures, and if you zoom into the middle pic, and look at the size of her head and body, and compare to the other two pics, the size doesn't change much. It's just that in the first pic she is laying down, so her fat sort of swells around her, and in the last pic, I sort of imagined her falling backwards, so her belly is flying upwards. Yes, it defies physics, but hey, that's why this genre is so fun! :D

Critiques


:iconmoonvamp:
First, for the critique. In the middle panel, she seems to be at a smaller size than she is portrayed in the first and last ones, where she looks absolutely enormous. Also, her right arm in the first panel could have used a bit of shading because it seems out of place when the rest of her body is shaded to some degree. Lastly, the way that her ass is shaped in the middle panel almost seems in incorrect correlation with her left leg, making it seem somewhat arduous for her to be standing in the first place.

The shading is more impressive than it has been in past works. Besides the one pointed out, each spot seems to have the right amount of shade. The dialogue and expressions are extremely cute, and one can't help but absolutely smile at Nekora's divine expressions. The coloring brings the right texture and shine.
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:icondragon-storm:
Once Again I'm not one to critique, mostly cause critic's are usually complete assholes. Anyway this Pic is great, the artists style captures the almost realistic look of a large women or in this case a SSBBW as I believe they're called when they reach that size...

I can't really find any flaw with this piece, if anything the lower part with her flabby gut waving in the air looks a little odd, But that's probably the only thing even slightly off...

This pic is too cute, especially the frame in the middle, I can't really say much else, I'm speechless at the moment...
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:iconblazing-alchemist:
Dude. That's awesome! XD
:iconnexis89:
Well you definitely know I love it ^^
Like I've said over and over again, thank you so much for this excellent pic ^^

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:iconbedbendersinc:
hehehe, thanks!

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:iconsharkdude5590:
awwww! You need to do more like this

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:iconbedbendersinc:
Your more than welcome friend, it was a pleasure. :D

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:iconbedbendersinc:
Thanks! And I plan to! :)

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:iconsharkdude5590:
cool, and are color commiss still $30? that is a little hefty (lol) even if you are amazing

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:icondanteisadevil:
excellent work really great detail on the fat

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