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A picture of one of the first, if not THE first victims of the expansion epedimic. There is little hospitals and Dr.s can do, other than try their best to make these unfortunate fatties comfortable.

Artist's Note: It's a very simple picture, but I think it has decent proportions, coloring, and angle. Not to mention it is an image of a basic Bed Bender.

This picture is part of the history of Bed Benders Inc. [link]

Critiques


:iconzewhatcher:
This reminds me a lot of the older photographs from back in the 20s-50s with the patients lying in a bed. Very black and white ish. Due to this fact I'm forgiving a lot of the sketchy look this picture has.

The overall effect of the picture is wonderful and gives credence to your name. Having read the story explaining why you have these larger than average sized women is even better. :) Maybe you should link the two?

Anyway, the vision is good, the perspective seems a bit off to me, giving the room more of a circle feel than the normal squared.

The way you drew the poor victim is well done. She actually appears to have cleavage and you can tell where her body allowed for more flexibility while she expanded.

The fact the bend is bending beneath her weight is a most excellent means of conveying just how large our lovely lass is.

Overall an excellent job.
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:iconsteve-aka:
I've been an admirer of your work for a while now so was thrilled to see another piece submitted by you, especially one portraying a gargantuan beauty such as this. You have quite a talent for depicting women of mammoth proportions and how said proportions affect their surrounding environments. There is an overall roundness to your women that is evident here in more ways that just her gorgeously humongous body. You've extended that roundness to the bending bed and overall curvy shape of the room itself. Well done!

I'm intrigued by your choice of a limited color palette for this - the green cast has a sort of clinical quality which is, I'm guessing, what you were going for in regards to how it relates to the BBInc. world you've created. However, I don't think the pale green color of her pants works in that its tone is too similar to her skin color. So similar is it, in fact, that at first I didn't think she was wearing pants at all, but upon closer inspection realized she was...or is she? At any rate, a darker shade would have been better to bring out the contrast and eliminate any questions regarding the wearing of trousers.

Although I really like the scenario depicted herein, and it is certainly drawn way better than I ever could do it, there is a sort of sketchy quality to the drawing. It almost feels unfinished, not sloppily so, mind you, just as if a few more minor polishes would have helped define the lines and bring out the dimensionality a little better.

It also seems that her breasts are defying gravity just a little too unrealistically, especially since the rest of her body seems to be bearing the full brunt of that force. As large as they are, I believe they'd be flopping a bit more to the sides and not be quite so centered atop her belly. Unless, of course, I'm mistaken and her top is made from some super-intense material designed by BBInc. to support the mammoth mammaries of the virally inflated women of your world, in which case I stand corrected.

I do, however, quite like the way the bed is drawn. It really shows the potency of her weight and the struggle involved in supporting her girth upon the feeble frame. Nicely done!

Overall, I'm quite taken with this picture. It has an economic grace that gets its point across quickly and easily without overwhelming the eye with too many distractions. I think a little more shading and polishing would have helped but these are mere quibbles. It really is quite good and I appreciate your efforts in its creation. Thanks for posting this fine illustration and allowing me to critique it.
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:iconnexis89:
Glad to see this pic in it's full vastness, just like the gal. And like I said before, definitely a great move with the colors and details :>

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Drink your school, don't do milk, and stay in drugs.
:iconshinra41:
i like most of your stuff but this one is just gross. :p
:iconbedbendersinc:
Thank you! I'm happy you like it. :D

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BBinc.
:iconshrapnel-jones:
bizarre room angles bro


yes I am that petty

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Ok, so I really don't think that at all. Sorry for the inconvenience.
:iconbedbendersinc:
The room angle was very intentional, and I like it. Surely that's not ALL you see in the room.

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BBinc.
:iconnexis89:
And thank you for posting it, I love it :D

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Drink your school, don't do milk, and stay in drugs.

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